Thursday, July 9, 2009

rain

He sits in the middle of the road as the rain comes pouring down. In his arms he holds everything that is dear to him. His reason for living weakens as she fades away. Their voices blend together one last time

"I love you..."

The heart that kept him alive so long stops beating inside her chest. He kisses her for the last time. Painful tears melt his face into hers. With all his strength and love he holds her tight, praying her soul won’t escape her body.

In that moment he could almost love her back to life.

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We gain a profound understanding of what we hold dear once we lose it.
Posted by Louis at 7:33 PM
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18 comments:

  1. AlmightyHeidiJuly 9, 2009 at 9:41 PM

    That is ...wow....fantastic

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  2. AnonymousJuly 10, 2009 at 11:01 AM

    Louis you should write a book your talent is so obvious .
    From sesga

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  3. ShadowJuly 10, 2009 at 12:28 PM

    supremely well put!

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  4. JessieJuly 10, 2009 at 2:46 PM

    your words captivate me ... beautifully done...
    ;-)

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  5. serene chaosJuly 10, 2009 at 4:11 PM

    For a moment in time, I was right there in the rain, crying with you! Exceptionally beautiful!

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  6. AnonymousJuly 11, 2009 at 8:26 AM

    VEry true indeed.

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  7. katieleighJuly 11, 2009 at 2:03 PM

    I don't like that we are living too quickly and ignorantly that we have to lose to realise what we had. :( heartbeakinly beautiful post.

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  8. izzieJuly 12, 2009 at 11:02 PM

    You know what your words do to me... and how I feel them.
    :)

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  9. Lauralee ProvenzoJuly 13, 2009 at 7:14 AM

    That was the saddest thing I ever read. But very beautiful and made you think. Wow. Thank you.

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  10. MarylynnJuly 13, 2009 at 8:43 AM

    wow, your writing style reminds me of my own. except yours is better [:

    thanks for following

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  11. SyAfaWaNi ♥‿♥July 13, 2009 at 11:48 AM

    thanks 4 being one of my follower ya:)do write often ok!

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  12. whibleyJuly 14, 2009 at 2:28 PM

    you're good at this..=]..great one..

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  13. ToothfairyJuly 14, 2009 at 9:43 PM

    wow... Your writing is really good!
    Thank you for sharing, you should write very very often yes!


    *loves*

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  14. SerenityJuly 15, 2009 at 5:19 PM

    We gain a profound understanding of what we hold dear once we lose it.

    Truer words have never been spoken my friend (as you can see from my post this morning I truly know what you are saying right here)...

    (((Hugs)))

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  15. x NehaJuly 16, 2009 at 3:42 PM

    Wow. You're super talented :)

    And thanks for stopping by my blog and for the comment.

    x

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  16. Del C ... ★July 16, 2009 at 7:35 PM

    Honestly you made me cry, I was listening to a song while reading this post. You surely got a lot of talent.. ever thought about writing a book?

    xxx
    p.s. do you mind if i put your blog link in my blog? your blog gives me a lot of inspiration.

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  17. Ahahgshene July 21, 2009 at 8:16 PM

    it's crazy how your stories make it seem like im actually there to witness it.

    interesting story! i love it!

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  18. FriendzCenturyAugust 1, 2009 at 8:32 PM

    I've stumbled upon your blog to find words so touching and posts so dear to the heart.

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